Thursday 10 December 2015

pre-production presentation and stages

Updated Synopsis and treatment

The story begins in apartment block 15 where a boy called Tyler is bored and infuriated that his stressed out mother, Trish would not let him go out with his friends believing the area is dangerous at night. But his thoughts on the matter start to differ after Trish tells him a scary story of how creatures called ghouls come out of the brink of nightfall and stalk the streets for prey. She tells him that they don’t just stalk any prey, they take children as they are the easiest target.  She ends her story by telling that when they find their prey, they would either take the victims to be eaten or turned into their own kin.

This scares the boy satisfying Trish's worrying nature but once she’s out of the room, Tyler takes no belief in this silly tale and plans his escape for meeting with his friends.

But tonight what he doesn’t realize is that these ghouls are real and are hunting for prey this very night. They come out the drainage system in a group of three and begin to hunt. They spot the block and start to climb the structure without being noticed by the residents. Once they caught the scent of the Tyler they climb through an opened window one by one whilst being unnoticed by Trish and Tyler himself as he is getting ready to go out. 
 
As they ready themselves to nab the kid, Tyler realizes what’s happening, turns around to face his attackers and transforms into a werewolf. To the shock of the ghouls, they try to escape but tyler catches them off guards and rips them apart with his teeth and claws.

By the end, only one ghoul escapes the on slaughter and comes to realize they’ve chosen the wrong kid to take this night especially when it sees the full moon drifting clearly in the night's sky.

Once the ghoul is clear of the vicinity, Tyler climbs out of the window and follows suit, staring at the moon and hears other werewolves’ howling call. Tyler is ready to find his pack and hunt for his own prey night whilst a shocked, dismayed but unsurprised Trish looks on in the living room. 
 
Pacing: The pacing should be quick to fit the 90 seconds but it would need quick for the parts that don't contribute to the important parts of the story. It would have to keep the audience engaged with the story but leave time for the plot to get an understanding to audience through visual personalities and traits from characters.

•Style: It would have to be gritty and dark so it would have influenced art styles of obvious people like Tim Burton. It should have the sense of being unrealistic and surreal to get the true depth of the horror genre. The colours would have be presented as decrepit and worn out.

•target audience: adults and mostly people over the age of 18.

•mood and overall vibe: chilling, scary and tense.

•production methods: use of both hand drawn and computer drawn animation techniques for both the animatic and the final look for the animation.

•Software:  TV paint, after effects , Adobe Photoshop.

•sound effects and music: It would to be terrifying; unnerving and tense which can help the pacing of the film. Main music inspirations would come from such films like ‘Jaws’ and ‘The Sandman.’

editing: Premiere pro and after effects.

•length of time: 90 seconds.

This will be changed as feedback showed that the narrative would need to be changed and shortened down including a few changes to treatment where appropriate if I make any changes to how I am designing and animating the film.

concept art 


production schedule 

character development 




















Feedback from lecturers and peers
  • Research music inspiration and sound effects when creating the animatic
  • Produce animatic and colour scripting
  • sort out the storyboard and plot as it has holes in the story as they didn't see how this would come across as a silent film
  • use monochrome colour palettes when producing concept art in photoshop
  • make sure to address that visuals and character personality traits can explain the story without dialogue
  • artist inspirations other than tim burton
  • As given by fellow students, they suggest that the kid could already be outside when caught by ghouls
  • if using silent techniques don't use names for the characters in the synopsis.
  • make sure to do the animatic to see and change scenes and cut outs unimportant plot points if possible to fit into the specified time frame from the brief.

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