Thursday 6 November 2014

Character and Script idea 1 (Carson)




 

Every time I enter the gym, I’ve always felt uncomfortable when going to use equipment where this strange man goes. But what makes me more uncomfortable about him is not how he would lurk around being a fearful, tough figure towards people but how he doesn’t connect with people; how nobody knows what he sounds like because he never speaks to anyone and how he’s always alone, practically he’s a ghost because nobody who has ever seen him knows anything about him. No one knows his name, his past or any indication of where he might. But people like to make gossip and make their own theories on who this loner is from time to time.

Over time I’ve listened and spoken to people that have said they overheard rumours and stories, all with their different versions to others even if they are either true or false. Most said that his name is Carson and that he was a soldier, scarred in battle, either physically or mentally which could explain how he doesn’t talk to people or how we have never seen him make friends; an informant who could as well as be undercover right at this moment or that he was. Some even said that he was a mob boss or a crook who might have shady connections or has a dark past that he would like to forget went wrong.

People have also said that when they have spotted him changing, they have noticed scarring all over his back. My thoughts on would indicate that if the stories I’ve heard relate, that he was injured in battle or tortured when things. They’ve even said that they heard him express sounds of pain when he moved in the wrong motion when he’s changing his cloths. This would indicate that some of the scarring or all of the major ones are recent.

On one occasion, I tried to talk to the man. Saying the most common things that people would say when they first meet like ‘hello’, ‘how are you’ or ‘how come I’ve never seen you around here before’? But all what I got responded was grunts and stares of disinterest of talking to anybody. This made me feel uncomfortable but also sad and curious to know why he’s like this.

Eventually, things started to get ugly when one of gym members got to the point of becoming fed up with the disinterest attitude and making everyone uneasy to his presence. I was there on the day and saw the exchange between the two men. This was a mistake that the angry gymnast did towards Carson. As I saw that this man is someone not to be fooled around with. This was in terms of his cringing, muted silence but clearly most of all is his brute strength that he possesses that could put the gymnast in his place.

All the angry gymnast said was ‘hey, I’m getting sick and tired of you making everyone extremely uncomfortable, I feel that you don’t belong here. So why don’t you get lost before you make people further uneasy’. What I saw next was more shocking. Carson didn’t exchange any words but instead exchanged with his fists and knocked the other man onto the floor with blood pouring from his nose with clear and quick signs of deep bruises on his face. The fight was broken up as soon as it began with two other men picking up the angry gymnast from the floor but do not dare to restrain Carson out of fear. All we knew he just walked away, carried on with his usual exercising routine in silence and then left through the door after an hour of the violent exchange.




 

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